Hey Steven! I think having him say something is super cool. As it is, I'm hearing "you fail!". You might make it feel a bit more natural if you "cushion the landing" at the end and make the ease out a bit longer. The part where his finger is going upward also feels a little bit abrupt. Aside from that, awesome! -Li
Hey Steven, I agree with Li about 'cushioning the landing' I also feel like the ending is quite abrupt. However, I really like the beginning, I love how the hand and finger drag behind, and then snap up at the top and how the arm and body holds there.
Hey Steven!
ReplyDeleteI think having him say something is super cool. As it is, I'm hearing "you fail!".
You might make it feel a bit more natural if you "cushion the landing" at the end and make the ease out a bit longer. The part where his finger is going upward also feels a little bit abrupt.
Aside from that, awesome!
-Li
Hey Steven,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Li about 'cushioning the landing' I also feel like the ending is quite abrupt. However, I really like the beginning, I love how the hand and finger drag behind, and then snap up at the top and how the arm and body holds there.
-Jeanette