Good start! Though there could be a bit more added to make this really amazing.
First off, I really like the flexibility you've given the finger, however I'd like to see that translated into the entire body.
Also, his hand seems to move a lot more than his arm and body. I know this is your first pass, so you're probably planning on adding more anticipation, however I think you should block in the basic movements for the body and head so that it's easier to polish it all up to the same level.
And making the extremes a bit more pushed will really help add to the weight and feel of this simple action.
Overall I think it's starting to look good! So keep going! :]
sup! Nice point, i picture him saying, "you betcha!" or something. Good timing and anticipation. The finger is nice and bouncy but seems to move down slowly compared to the rapid lift in the arm/hand. Also, the arm is nice but the torso and head seem to need some slow in's and out's to smoothen out the movements. With the mouth movement included, this is going to turn out really nice! keep it up. -brandon o
Hey Alex!
ReplyDeleteGood start! Though there could be a bit more added to make this really amazing.
First off, I really like the flexibility you've given the finger, however I'd like to see that translated into the entire body.
Also, his hand seems to move a lot more than his arm and body. I know this is your first pass, so you're probably planning on adding more anticipation, however I think you should block in the basic movements for the body and head so that it's easier to polish it all up to the same level.
And making the extremes a bit more pushed will really help add to the weight and feel of this simple action.
Overall I think it's starting to look good! So keep going! :]
-Naima
sup!
ReplyDeleteNice point, i picture him saying, "you betcha!" or something. Good timing and anticipation. The finger is nice and bouncy but seems to move down slowly compared to the rapid lift in the arm/hand. Also, the arm is nice but the torso and head seem to need some slow in's and out's to smoothen out the movements. With the mouth movement included, this is going to turn out really nice! keep it up.
-brandon o