I like the feeling of this test, in that she feels like her gesture is intimating like, "ohhhh ok" with her point. However, I feel like the finger would bounce back up a little faster at the end. Giving it a little faster bounce back up would sell it a little more I think. Megan Hart
I'm really liking the direction that this test is going. I kinda get the feel like she may be a little drunk, which I'm hoping is somewhere near your intention. If not, the back arm is giving me the clues that she may be inebriated in some way. Overall, i love the facial expression and the anticipation. There still could be some smoothing with the follow through at the end of the pointing finger, and you may consider some drag on the head when she pulls back.
I like the anticipation on this test.
ReplyDeleteIt seems that towards the end, the pointing finger bounces a little to much. Either quicken the bounces or try doing one bounce.
I also enjoy seeing the other arm settle.
There's my sandwich crit.
Michael Bliss
I like the feeling of this test, in that she feels like her gesture is intimating like, "ohhhh ok" with her point.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I feel like the finger would bounce back up a little faster at the end. Giving it a little faster bounce back up would sell it a little more I think.
Megan Hart
Nick Marshall here.
ReplyDeleteI'm really liking the direction that this test is going. I kinda get the feel like she may be a little drunk, which I'm hoping is somewhere near your intention. If not, the back arm is giving me the clues that she may be inebriated in some way. Overall, i love the facial expression and the anticipation. There still could be some smoothing with the follow through at the end of the pointing finger, and you may consider some drag on the head when she pulls back.