Dear Naima, I love that you chose to move his glasses. It was a delightful decision, but I feel that it may be a little to under done. You could make it fall more forward on his nose and also maybe slide down a little. The entire body is moving and settling at the same time which feels a little inhuman but tweaking the timing shouldn't be that big of a change. Stay awesome. Sincerely, Steven Celiceo
Hey Naima, This looks really good! I love the anticipation in the hand, but when the hand goes down in the beginning it would be great if the finger bent a bit from the overlapping action.
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ReplyDeleteHi Naima, great shot. I like the way he moves the arms. I think the elbow has some pops when it moves up and down. Hope this helps
Dear Naima,
ReplyDeleteI love that you chose to move his glasses. It was a delightful decision, but I feel that it may be a little to under done. You could make it fall more forward on his nose and also maybe slide down a little. The entire body is moving and settling at the same time which feels a little inhuman but tweaking the timing shouldn't be that big of a change. Stay awesome.
Sincerely,
Steven Celiceo
Hey Naima,
ReplyDeleteThis looks really good!
I love the anticipation in the hand, but when the hand goes down in the beginning it would be great if the finger bent a bit from the overlapping action.