Hi Li, I really enjoy the overall feel of this, very fluid! The thing that sticks out to me though is the elbow of his pointing hand. It seems to spazz out a bit as the arm finishes rising up and as it comes back down. It distracts from the rest of the animation. Also, the finger seems a little too fluid right at the very end when the hand comes down to a halt. It kinda feels more like an object he's holding, than a finger with bones and muscles in it. I would pull that back a bit but that's up to you since it does suit the rest of the animation. And, that was a very successful touch with glasses falling on his face! -Jessica
Hi Li, I really enjoy the overall feel of this, very fluid! The thing that sticks out to me though is the elbow of his pointing hand. It seems to spazz out a bit as the arm finishes rising up and as it comes back down. It distracts from the rest of the animation. Also, the finger seems a little too fluid right at the very end when the hand comes down to a halt. It kinda feels more like an object he's holding, than a finger with bones and muscles in it. I would pull that back a bit but that's up to you since it does suit the rest of the animation. And, that was a very successful touch with glasses falling on his face! -Jessica
ReplyDeleteI love the glasses! I'm totally stealing that!
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