Hey Keith, I think this is a great start. I like where you are going with the prep for the main action. I think however your hand is leading the action on the way down for the antic. Since we are going for overlapping action with this assignement, the hand would follow last in the movement. Much like the tail end of the pendulum from the pendulum assignment back from art 51b. Keep up the good work! -Kevin Maier
ps. Check out the comment I left for Kathy McNeal's first pass concerning the eyes getting funky. It looks like your 11 rig is coming across the same issue.
The only issue I see, aside from what Kevin said, is that the motion of the hand coming toward the face and the face coming toward the hand feels like it is twinning in a weird way. Maybe because they are moving the same speed toward each other at the same time.
Hey Keith,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a great start. I like where you are going with the prep for the main action. I think however your hand is leading the action on the way down for the antic. Since we are going for overlapping action with this assignement, the hand would follow last in the movement. Much like the tail end of the pendulum from the pendulum assignment back from art 51b.
Keep up the good work!
-Kevin Maier
ps. Check out the comment I left for Kathy McNeal's first pass concerning the eyes getting funky. It looks like your 11 rig is coming across the same issue.
The only issue I see, aside from what Kevin said, is that the motion of the hand coming toward the face and the face coming toward the hand feels like it is twinning in a weird way. Maybe because they are moving the same speed toward each other at the same time.
ReplyDelete- Anna Klonoff