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Hi Justin, I like the overall feel of this, it definitely feels like he's putting his whole body into it. The things that stick out the most though is the snappiness of the hand as it's being raised and pointing back. It's supposed to be quick, but this seems too quick. Try finding a happy medium between that and the settle you have with the hand coming down, since that feels much more realistic. Also, the non pointing hand/forearm doesn't feel natural in the second half of this exercise. It snaps forward way too much and then back again.
You also found a camera angle that made the librarian look like Jeff Goldblum. Amazing! He's teaching the class about the Chaos Theory.
Hey Justin, It's looking pretty good! In addition to Jess's comments about the snappiness I would just like to add that you may think about having the body begin to move before he moves his hand. They look like they are a little too in-synch. Especially the head and hand. Keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteMade some spelling errors, this is the corrected version!
ReplyDeleteHi Justin, I like the overall feel of this, it definitely feels like he's putting his whole body into it. The things that stick out the most though is the snappiness of the hand as it's being raised and pointing back. It's supposed to be quick, but this seems too quick. Try finding a happy medium between that and the settle you have with the hand coming down, since that feels much more realistic. Also, the non pointing hand/forearm doesn't feel natural in the second half of this exercise. It snaps forward way too much and then back again.
You also found a camera angle that made the librarian look like Jeff Goldblum. Amazing! He's teaching the class about the Chaos Theory.
Hey Justin,
ReplyDeleteIt's looking pretty good!
In addition to Jess's comments about the snappiness I would just like to add that you may think about having the body begin to move before he moves his hand. They look like they are a little too in-synch. Especially the head and hand.
Keep up the good work!