I think you have nice overlapping action with her wrist and fingers, and its nice that you added a little action to her other arm as well. I think it could look better if after she raises her finger, she points it down a little faster. Even though its good to have that little anticipation there, I would make the pause a little less. Or at least, have her elbow bend back a little when her pointed finger reaches its apex, you know? Megan Hart
Overall very nice.Things are looking pretty smooth and you have some nice overlapping action. At the apex pose there's some wiggle in the finger and I can't tell if it is intentional. If it is intentional I'd push it more so it reads clearer, or just take it out, which ever. Nice job.
I think you have nice overlapping action with her wrist and fingers, and its nice that you added a little action to her other arm as well.
ReplyDeleteI think it could look better if after she raises her finger, she points it down a little faster. Even though its good to have that little anticipation there, I would make the pause a little less. Or at least, have her elbow bend back a little when her pointed finger reaches its apex, you know?
Megan Hart
Overall very nice.Things are looking pretty smooth and you have some nice overlapping action.
ReplyDeleteAt the apex pose there's some wiggle in the finger and I can't tell if it is intentional. If it is intentional I'd push it more so it reads clearer, or just take it out, which ever. Nice job.