Hey Brandon this is looking great. It has a lot of personality. I like the holds and speedups that you placed in it. I know that having the arm straight as its being raised part of its personality, but I just feel like it should bend a little at the top before it comes back down. Also I think the head should stoop more as the torso comes up. Also the left arm I think, should dangle a bit more in front of him at the end, because his pose is stooping and to have his left arm at his side the hole time looks a little unnatural.
But this Animation is looking great its full of personality, I think your almost done. Great job.
I do think that it feels like it has a good texture. I would see if I could finesse his left arm (the hanging one) since it seems to pop midway. I might also try and make sure that the pointing hand doesn't come to a complete stop at the end. Maybe add a cushion?
But it looks really good! Seconding that it has a lot of personality.
Hey Brandon, I really like the motion of yours, the arch of the arms movement is really nice. As well as the arching back of the spine, and the overlapping action of the head are nice as well! It looks really childlike and charming!
Hey Brandon this is looking great. It has a lot of personality. I like the holds and speedups that you placed in it. I know that having the arm straight as its being raised part of its personality, but I just feel like it should bend a little at the top before it comes back down. Also I think the head should stoop more as the torso comes up. Also the left arm I think, should dangle a bit more in front of him at the end, because his pose is stooping and to have his left arm at his side the hole time looks a little unnatural.
ReplyDeleteBut this Animation is looking great its full of personality, I think your almost done. Great job.
Ruben Sanchez
I do think that it feels like it has a good texture. I would see if I could finesse his left arm (the hanging one) since it seems to pop midway. I might also try and make sure that the pointing hand doesn't come to a complete stop at the end. Maybe add a cushion?
ReplyDeleteBut it looks really good! Seconding that it has a lot of personality.
-- Adrianne Thater
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI really like the motion of yours, the arch of the arms movement is really nice. As well as the arching back of the spine, and the overlapping action of the head are nice as well! It looks really childlike and charming!
-Jeanette