Baker Jump

Critique Please.

Jeanette

Hey gang. I'd appreciate a crit, Thanks!

-Jeanette

Baker 2nd Post 03/21/12

I have made some improvements since my last post, but its still just not there yet. Comments appreciated.

Nam Dinh Mar 21, 2012

Megan Hart 3-20-12

Kevin Maier finger point 3-20-12

Kathy McNeal Point

So this is where I am so far. I've played with the movement of the wrist and of the head, just to try and get some of that overlap feel. There's something weird going on with the eyes, as I'm sure many of you have noticed in your own files of the girl point by now, and I'm trying to figure out how best to resolve that issue. Other than that, the basic feel I want to get with this girl is that her finger goes straight up, pauses in (rather than slowly moving around everywhere), and swings back down, as if she's saying "That, is exactly.... correct!"

-Kathy McNeal