Again your limbs seems jolty, almost teleporting from one spot to the next. Also your not moving the torso enough, also the head should have some action. I know for a fact that their is more change int he body in the apex of a ballerina jump. Look at your reference some more, really study those poses. Right now it is still a little stiff, and try finding a more interesting angle to shoot your animation. But I will say that the idea is good, and with a few tweeks this could be a great block in.
Again your limbs seems jolty, almost teleporting from one spot to the next. Also your not moving the torso enough, also the head should have some action. I know for a fact that their is more change int he body in the apex of a ballerina jump. Look at your reference some more, really study those poses. Right now it is still a little stiff, and try finding a more interesting angle to shoot your animation. But I will say that the idea is good, and with a few tweeks this could be a great block in.
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